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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Most people are not buying
newspapers
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 in the
future
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. They are reading online because
this
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 is very helpful, for people.
Firstly
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, We read the
news
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 on our mobile.
Secondly
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, Most individuals are not buying
newspapers
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.
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 with, Most prisons have mobile phones,
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 they are not buying
newspapers
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, when I will reading the
news
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 easily, on my mobile phone I will not be paying to money anybody
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, We are not waiting to fix the time, for the newspaper. I am talking and knowing about
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 most of the persons are will prefer,
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 easily available
news
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 in few minutes, and no wait for
news
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, But likes
this
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 technology.
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, I talked to you
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, sometimes the
news
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 takes very late 6 to 7 hours, But I will not buy
newspapers
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 in
future
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Then
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 We have missed the
news
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 some
news
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this
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 is very useful in our life until I prefer my mobile phone. We are talking to some people who speak
newspapers
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 who pay very high rates, As to they will be not buying
newspapers
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 in the
future
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. In, conclusion My family members will not be buying
newspapers
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 in the
future
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, Because they will get the
news
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 free through their mobile.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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