The maps show a shopping centre in 1985 and in 2005.

The maps show a shopping centre in 1985 and in 2005.
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The given maps illustrate improvements and changes in a shopping centre,which had been made over a twenty-year period. As observed, there have been a few noticeable modifications in terms of the internal layout of the shopping mall, the basic shape of the mall is still the same as previously. First of all, at the beginning of the period , in 1985 there was a bookstore which is situated between Woman’s Clothing and Sporting Goods zone. The gift stock which was laid
next
to the Card Shop has been demolished as well.
Moreover
, the fountain located in the lobby has been removed in order to allow for a bigger area. Turning to the 2005 map, the layout of the videos has been transformed into 2 parts: the smaller one beside the Jewellery Shop has been converted into a Shoe store and the other part has been turned into an Electronics store. Focusing on the food court zone, all the food stalls have been transferred into Café shops.
To sum up
, there have been many alternations made inside, the entrance, department store and the bank have been still kept in the same location.
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