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Some feel that school uniforms make schools safer for students, create a "level playing field" that reduces socioeconomic disparities and encourage children to focus on their studies rather than their clothes. Others say school uniforms infringe upon students' right to express their individuality, have no positive effect on behavior and academic achievement. Discuss both sides & give your opinion. Write at least 250 words.

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For
long
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 time now there has been a debate about whether
school
uniform
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uniforms
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 should be
compulsary
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compulsory
 or not. Few people
beelive
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believe
 that
school
uniform
helps
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 in bringing
unity
 and makes
students
to
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focus on academic performance.
However
, there
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 another set of people who
belive
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believe
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 that
school
uniforms
restricts
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students
 from showing their
identitty
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identity
 and
does
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 not relate to their academic performance. In
this
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 I shall discuss both
the
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views and give my opinion in the conclusion. Today in almost every part of the world every
school
 has implemented
school
uniforms
 for their
students
, hoping to generate a sense of
unity
 among the
students
, that no matter what their age, religion or colour of skin they belong to one
school
 and they should stick
togather
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together
.
This
unity
 among the
students
 is
reveled
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 when they
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 one
other
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another
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 even when they move out of
school
. By implementing
school
uniforms
 even a rich student or a poor student gets
same
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the same
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 identity.
On the other
hand
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 few people argue that by restricting
students
 to
single
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uniform
 they are being refused
to
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 express their individuality,
moreover
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 there is no
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correlation
 between
school
uniform
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uniforms
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 and student academic achievement.
Further
, implementing
school
uniforms
 will discriminate
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against muslim
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muslim
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Muslim
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 women
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who wear
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wear
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wearing
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burkha
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the burkha
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 as part of their religious practice.
This
also
 restricts the diversity among the
students
 and
monotonusly
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monotonously
keep
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keeps
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students
 in
single
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 dress. On considering both the views of having
school
uniforms
 and not having them, I am of the opinion that by implementing
school
uniforms
 a sense of
unity
 can be generated
with in
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 the
students
 in the early stage of life.
This
unity
 will
last
 upon them for years to come
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