Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead going directly to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages.

It has been observed that the youth take a gap from their study after finishing their schooling

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of getting admission at The University. There are several betterments and detriments to

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in the ensuing paragraph. Discussing the benefits, the prime reward for travel is that the young guns can learn about the culture. By

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,I mean that as student roams around the world during their break, they will learn about different traditions, languages and social skills.

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, they gain their approach to adapting new things into their life

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and become multilingual people.

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, students get practical experience

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doing part-time jobs.

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, the pupil learns about maintaining financial condition, enhances knowledge about businesses

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finds their choice for

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study.

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, the admission department from the University of Pennsylvania concluded that the students who get admission after a gap, results are exceptional compared to other pupils. There is a lot of disadvantage

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, some students do not return back to their course .

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, they are doing a job or job they like as it's earning good and the work is good , they do not like to come back because they are happy with it .

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they lose the chance to be experts in that field ,

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they do their studies

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they have a degree and can make a career in a big company , now they can only do a task on a small scale . In conclusion ,

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, the student can have an experience of a job , but they can not be able to expert in a particular career . Every coin has two sides , a positive and a negative , same is followed by having a gap in school and university education