The graph shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The charts depict the proportion of e-shopping purchases for 4

sectors

in New Zealand in 2002 and 2013.

Overall

travel

Correct article usage

the travel

show examples

sector

was on top in both years. Film/music and books

sectors

increased their

sales

, whilst other

sectors

lost

sales

. The two significant

sectors

were clothes and

travel

, with 24% and 36% respectively.

However

while

the clothes

sector

had decreased by almost one-tenth by 2013 the

travel

sales

sector

was replaced by the

travel

sector

as the first-highest

sales

in 2013.

Also

, the clothes

sector

went down from the second-highest

sector

to the smallest

sector

in 2013. The remaining two

sectors

had around one-fifth of the total in 2003 each, but all increased from 3% to 22% for books

sales

and from 12% to 33% for the film and music

sector

. Whilst the book

sector

went up from the lowest

sector

to the third-highest

sector

in 2013, the film and music

sector

took leadership in 2013.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sectors, travel, sector, sales with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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