The graph shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The charts depict the proportion of e-shopping purchases for 4
sectors
Use synonyms
in New Zealand in 2002 and 2013.
Overall
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,
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travel
Correct article usage
the travel
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sector
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was on top in both years. Film/music and books
sectors
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increased their
sales
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, whilst other
sectors
Use synonyms
lost
sales
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. The two significant
sectors
Use synonyms
were clothes and
travel
Use synonyms
, with 24% and 36% respectively.
However
Linking Words
,
while
Linking Words
the clothes
sector
Use synonyms
had decreased by almost one-tenth by 2013 the
travel
Use synonyms
sales
Use synonyms
sector
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was replaced by the
travel
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sector
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as the first-highest
sales
Use synonyms
in 2013.
Also
Linking Words
, the clothes
sector
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went down from the second-highest
sector
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to the smallest
sector
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in 2013. The remaining two
sectors
Use synonyms
had around one-fifth of the total in 2003 each, but all increased from 3% to 22% for books
sales
Use synonyms
and from 12% to 33% for the film and music
sector
Use synonyms
. Whilst the book
sector
Use synonyms
went up from the lowest
sector
Use synonyms
to the third-highest
sector
Use synonyms
in 2013, the film and music
sector
Use synonyms
took leadership in 2013.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sectors, travel, sector, sales with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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