Some people think that governments should increase the tax on unhealthy food to enhance public health. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some say that in order to increase the
health
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of the people, the state should impose a
tax
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on unhealthier
food
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.
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essay agrees with
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statement because
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the imposition of a
tax
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, junk
food
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will become costlier,
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decreasing consumption and
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collected tariff amount will be used to create awareness about obesity and other related
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problems. The first reason, why
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essay agrees with
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statement is that levy of
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additional tariffs on
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junk or canned
food
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will increase the
prices
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of the
food
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, which generally creates obesity and other
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issues.
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the
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, the
food
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chains will have to pass on the
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to the consumers,
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which
prices
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of
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items will definitely increase. With increased
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, it has been seen in many developing countries that sales of
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products have significantly decreased.
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has resulted in few people going to hospitals.
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, in the Kingdom of Saudi Arabia, when the government imposed an additional
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on sugary drinks, their
prices
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increased, resulting in a decrease in sales and youngsters becoming obese. Another reason for my agreement with taxing unhealthier
food
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is that with collected
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, the concerned
health
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department may utilize
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money for disseminating information about the negative effects of the
food
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, which generally causes
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problems. The advertisements on the news channels or the newspapers may contain information about obesity, its causes and the lifestyle, which men and women should follow in order to avoid these problems.
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, the administration can require the
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companies to print on their envelopes, bags or price boards the calories, that burgers, fries and other drinks have in them and their effects on
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if more than a certain level is consumed. In conclusion, to make a healthier nation, it has become imperative that governments should charge more tariffs on foods, which are not healthy for the nation.
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feat of administration will not only help in the reduction of
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food
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intake but
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serve another purpose of generating awareness in people about related
health
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diseases.
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