Some people believe that violence in the media, such as in television programs and films, directly results in violent behavior. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There has been an argument recently that brutality in the
media
, such
as on social networks and films
could lead to violent Change preposition
in films
behavior
in the real world. Personally, I disagree with Change the spelling
behaviour
this
statement because it mostly depends on how strong someone is mentally and liking violent things does not necessarily mean you are brutal yourself.
Firstly
, violent media
has been around us for many years and most likely for the rest of society’s existence. However
, you rarely see any cases of people
commiting
cruel acts by seeing a gore film. A solid proof Correct your spelling
committing
to
Change preposition
of
this
is that probably everyone has seen an explicit film but no one has ever picked up a knife and went
on a massacre after watching a violent movie because nobody would react like that unless they are already mentally ill in the first place. Wrong verb form
gone
For example
, most murder cases are due to
people
with a
mental Correct article usage
apply
disorder
and not because of violent films.
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disorders
Secondly
, you would be surprised that a lot of people
enjoy brutal things not because they have a sort of sick pleasure but because these types of media
feed their curiosity and provide genuine entertainment for them. The proof to
Change preposition
of
this
is that there is a large amount
of followers for Change the quantifier
number
this
genre of media
and it is likely that none of these people
are
savage because as we all know violent or scary Change the verb form
is
media
provides a sense of suspense and fear, not violent for people
which not many other types of media
gives so this
is the reason why there is such
a big following for this
genre. For instance
, I am a devoted follower to
gore films but I am still a scaredy cat and would not hurt an ant.
In conclusion, I do not agree with the statement mentioned because violent Change preposition
of
media
does not make a normal person brutal because
it only does if they are already in a weak mental state. Correct word choice
apply
Furthermore
, most people
just view violent media
as a means of entertainment, not as something to replicate.Submitted by pcamps.pr on
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