In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Intergovernmental trading treaties allow domestic and international companies
join
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to join
in
a mutual global market, Change preposition
apply
Correct word choice
and create
create
a highly competitive business environment. To ensure the ability that Wrong verb form
creating
products
catch attention
of Add an article
the attention
consumers
, many companies are most likely focus
their resources on advertising Fix the infinitive
to focus
products
' improvements or new features. The intellection behind this
development will be represented in this
essay, along with
my evaluations of the impacts of this
occurrence.
Taking advantage of many lifestyles and phenomenon that has spread widely among consumers
, business
has ended up releasing more enhancements and new features o catch buyers’ attention. Living in a modern society, Add an article
the business
consumers
are constantly fed with many more perception
of lifestyle and they are capable of diverting Fix the agreement mistake
perceptions
consumers
’ behavior
. People are daily instilled with many lifestyles that highlight the …., Change the spelling
behaviour
along with
the “fear of missing out” mindset, they are more likely to be afraid of losing out on any opportunities to catch up with others, show
off themselves. Correct word choice
and show
Therefore
, many promoting strategies have been designated based on this
psychological trait in which purchasing decisions are mostly made because of consumers
’ desire to try new experiences. Sales or products
value Change the noun form
product
consequently
rise, accomplishing the goal of those business
.
Change the determiner
that business
those businesses
This
kind of strategy imposes adverse effects on both society and individuals. On individual
level, constant product Add an article
an individual
the individual
launch
with new improvements would deteriorate young adults’ credit. Advertisements Fix the agreement mistake
launches
that
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apply
based
on Add a missing verb
are based
consumers
’ behavior
could leave Change the spelling
behaviour
huge
impression on their Add an article
a huge
mind
, luring them to make more purchase decisions; Fix the agreement mistake
minds
thus
, this
, in various ways, promotes consumerism, which can trap the young or those that are financially insufficient in a loop of debts. For example
, demand
for meat is mostly Correct article usage
the demand
along with
environmental damage. Obtaining this
, many companies have tried to prove and emphasize that they process meat without harming the environment, making consumers
buy their meat because of the message delivered ,even it
is far more expensive than the normal Correct word choice
if it
one
in the market. Additionally
, being surrounded by constantly improved products
, which are produced to make the older one
become obsolete, people tend to associate their value with possessing the latest version of any good. Correct pronoun usage
ones
This
not only seriously menaces one
financially because that one
can fall into impulsive buying, but also
, in a long run, leads to a throw away
society.
Join the words
throwaway
throw-away
To conclude
, advertisements on
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for
products’
improvements are most likely to gear towards customers’ psychology, encouraging them to purchase that Change noun form
products
one
. Despite the increase in buying traffic, to consumers
, especially those are
not financially stable, debts might be unavoidable, and so is Correct pronoun usage
who are
self-value
underestimation.Add an article
a self-value
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Word Count
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