n modern society, it is possible to go shopping, work and accommodate via the internet without face to face contact with one another. To what extent do you think this is a positive or negative development?

People have different views about the alternative forms of certain activities on the
Internet
.
While
in some ways it may seem that digital retailing, working and booking hotels at
home
are redundant inventions, I personally consider them innovative and useful. Some people believe that virtual shopping, working and accommodation is better to be done in person than sitting at
home
. When going to stores, customers have an opportunity to try on the clothes or shoes, without having trouble with returning the goods after buying them online if they are not right-sized. The same applies to accommodation: a number of hotels offer guests a room tour in order to let them have a look and
then
make decisions. With online booking, there is no
such
an experience, and because some lodgings do not provide refund or room changing services, guests may be disappointed throughout their holiday because they have to stay in a room
that is
unappealing to them. Moving on to working, it is more effective to work in offices, thinking from boss’s and employee’s perspective. Managers could keep an eye on the employees when they are sitting in the office, because if the workers are not doing work-related affairs, directors can chastise them in person, and an environment with working aura acts as a motivation for the employees.
However
, when it comes to global problems,
such
as a pandemic, there is, undoubtedly, no other option than doing things at
home
. In
this
case, going to the malls, commuting to work or, most importantly, travelling would be putting your health at risk, so the
Internet
, in the past few years of COVID-19 pandemic, has been more valuable than ever. Everything was done at
home
with
Internet
access, and because of online shopping, some fashion bloggers or influencers had a way to purchase clothes for making their content on social media.
In other words
, virtual shops saved them from losing their jobs. The same goes for working: without apps like Zoom, Skype or the
Internet
connection, a majority of people could have lost their jobs, and,
therefore
, the companies could have faced bankruptcy.
Finally
, accommodate via the
Internet
was the safest option back in the days of the virus outbreak, because
this
alternative could minimise the contact with each other, since the viruses are most commonly transmitted through the air. All in all, it seems to me that the
Internet
has become a vital part of human’s life, and the activities that can be done online, I believe, are truly convenient and useful.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
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  • In general

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