You should spend about 20 mintues on this task. You are an alumnus (alumna) of a Bluegill University, registered in a volunteer program to conduct informal interviews with prospective students. Recently, an entrant has been assigned to you to have an interview. Write a letter to the entrant. In your letter: state your reason for writing briefly describe the interview and inform the entrant of a possibilty to cancel it propose a convenient time for an interview You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Jessica, My name is Alicia Liberty, and as an alumni volunteer, I am conducting interviews with prospective students. You have registered with our university, so I am writing
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with you. It is a relaxed, informal
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, and the motive behind these interviews is to know about our new students better and help them
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explore suitable career options. You can
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ask questions about our university. I will answer them.
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, it is an optional
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,
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, if you wish you can cancel it too. But if you are interested in the
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, we can conduct an
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sometime in the next two weeks. How about
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coming Saturday, May 12th at 11:00 pm? If not, we can schedule it to 18th May. You can advise me date and time convenient for you. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Lisha Lokai

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Make sure to double-check specific details such as names at the beginning to avoid variations (e.g., use 'Lisha Lokai' consistently).
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Consider breaking longer sentences into shorter ones for improved readability and clarity. This can help in presenting single ideas more clearly in each paragraph.
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The tone of the letter is warm and inviting, which is very appropriate for the purpose of the communication.
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The letter follows a logical structure, clearly stating the reason for writing, describing the interview, and proposing potential times.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite
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