some believe that the best way to keep fit to join a gym or health club while others think doing every activities such as walking and climbing stairs is as effecient. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Opinions are divided as to whether doing

exercise

at

gym

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or health club is

more

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efficient

way

to stay healthy rather than strolling and climbing ladders. Despite the fact that general activity, like walking, is one

way

to keep fit,

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going

gym

is

also

the best

way

. In

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essay, I will describe both viewpoints and give my own opinion. On the one hand, there are lots of benefits to

join

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in a

gym

for making their bodies to be fit.

Firstly

, the equipment in a

gym

is more suitable for

exercise

in each part of their bodies.

Secondly

, each health club has a trainer to teach us

in

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the right

way

of

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exercise

.

This

method

also

ameliorates trainees to have a track to themselves, which

push

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them to work out every day.

For instance

, if people who

do

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exercise

at

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a club

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club

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have a trainer, he will check us to work out, or whether what food

you

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eat is appropriate and consists of nutrients to stay healthy.

Finally

, there are a lot of people to do

exercise

with you at

gym

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.

This

will lead you not to feel lonely and encourage you to work out continuously.

On the other hand

, general activities

are

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also

several

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advantages.

To begin

, these exercises are easier to do it everywhere,

such

as

homes

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in homes

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, offices and parks.

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, if there is a park in your village, you can go to

walk

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or run instantly.

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is

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also

not

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waste

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your time to travel and

save

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costs to pay as a membership.

Moreover

, regular

exercise

is

good

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all-over body workout and a low-impact

sports

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when compared with others. In conclusion, even though general sports save our

expense

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and be easy to do, in my view, having a trainer at

gym

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is able to

be

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much faster to fit in shape.