some believe that the best way to keep fit to join a gym or health club while others think doing every activities such as walking and climbing stairs is as effecient. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Opinions are divided as to whether doing
exercise
at gym
or health club is Correct article usage
the gym
more
efficient Add an article
a more
way
to stay healthy rather than strolling and climbing ladders. Despite the fact that general activity, like walking, is one way
to keep fit, but
going Correct word choice
apply
gym
is also
the best way
. In this
essay, I will describe both viewpoints and give my own opinion.
On the one hand, there are lots of benefits to join
in a Change the verb form
joining
gym
for making their bodies to be fit. Firstly
, the equipment in a gym
is more suitable for exercise
in each part of their bodies. Secondly
, each health club has a trainer to teach us in
the right Change preposition
apply
way
of
Change preposition
to
exercise
. This
method also
ameliorates trainees to have a track to themselves, which push
them to work out every day. Correct subject-verb agreement
pushes
For instance
, if people who do
Unnecessary verb
apply
exercise
at Correct article usage
a club
club
have a trainer, he will check us to work out, or whether what food Fix the agreement mistake
clubs
you
eat is appropriate and consists of nutrients to stay healthy. Correct pronoun usage
they
Finally
, there are a lot of people to do exercise
with you at gym
. Add an article
the gym
This
will lead you not to feel lonely and encourage you to work out continuously.
On the other hand
, general activities are
Unnecessary verb
apply
also
several
advantages. Add a missing verb
have several
To begin
, these exercises are easier to do it everywhere, such
as homes
, offices and parks. Change preposition
in homes
For example
, if there is a park in your village, you can go to walk
or run instantly. Correct article usage
a walk
This
is
Unnecessary verb
apply
also
not
Add a missing verb
does not
waste
your time to travel and Fix the infinitive
to waste
save
costs to pay as a membership. Correct subject-verb agreement
saves
Moreover
, regular exercise
is good
all-over body workout and a low-impact Correct article usage
a good
sports
when compared with others.
In conclusion, even though general sports save our Fix the agreement mistake
sport
expense
and be easy to do, in my view, having a trainer at Fix the agreement mistake
expenses
gym
is able to Add an article
the gym
be
much faster to fit in shape.Unnecessary verb
apply
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