During our careers, we work with many different kinds of people. All of them have unique characteristics and personality traits. In your opinion, which of the following is the most important characteristic of a coworker? • a serious attitude regarding their work obligations • a willingness to learn new things • the ability to make other people laugh

In the period of our
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professions
, we
work
with lots of
people
who have different
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personalities
;
however
, everyone is
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divided
. It
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depends
on the qualities that the position requests, and there are
also
many facts and
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between jobs and
workers
. I will express my opinion in
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essay. In my point of view, I think the most important
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character
is
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attitude and
secondly
is ability.
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of students who would like to
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international company or find a good offer after school. They are
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tough
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and
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intelligent
, so most of their personalities are
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arrogant
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tend to
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their ways. Sometimes they even break the rules to achieve their targets which may make
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they would only care about the results.
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students do not like to be trained because they are the smartest. In the contract, if a person
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is humble and willing to learn the job properly by following the standard of process in companies, it will be good to keep the average qualities. On one hand,
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attitude
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people
become
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and make the
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employers
easy to manage.
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, there are
also
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back drowns
.
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always have to follow the process, they might become less creative and
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their
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to
work
afterwards.
On the other hand
, it is better to find the balance between
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rules and
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ideas. In
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, it is good for a company to have group programmes which make
workers
express their ideas and make
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creatively
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because sometimes the discussion will
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surprisingly
that two or three suggestions
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incredible
ideas. During the discussion,
people
need to be calm the cooperation with others which means they have to accept suggestions from colleagues. In
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conclusion
, I believe that it is better to have a good
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attitude
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people
willing to teach and give
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after the abilities will
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build
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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