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Today's food travels thousands of miles before it reaches customers. Is this a positive or negative trend?

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In the modern world, it is true that
people
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 have consumed
food
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 which travels thousands of miles.
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this
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 trend has some clear benefits, I am of an opinion that
this
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 has more detrimental effects on the whole. On the one hand, the main argument is that
people
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 can experience various
food
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, which means they have a wide range of options. It is seen that current
food
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 is exported and imported from different countries, and it
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 contains a variety of cultural backgrounds and interesting options.
This
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 allows
people
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 to access exotic ingredients and recipes which they never experienced before. Another point that needs to be considered is that the price of
food
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 is likely to reduce because of increasing
food
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 demand and supply.
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 trend might lead to massive production of certain
food
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 and
people
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 can enjoy more and more
food
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 from new countries and cultures. All these features make
people
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's diets
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filled with plenty of
food
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 and lead to certain advantages when they buy
food
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.
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, despite these benefits. the issue would bring about, there are still some apparent drawbacks we can expect.
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, the quality of
food
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 can be lower compared to local
food
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. When
food
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, especially fresh produce,
travel
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travels
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 for a long time, it is more likely to be spoiled or decayed, and consumers would eat unsafe
food
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 which is extremely detrimental
on
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 health.
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, canned or tinned
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 usually contains a large number of preservative chemicals to prevent
food
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 from spoiling. Even long periods of transport would result in severe environmental pollution because transportations
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 as planes and ships used to transport
food
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 emit a huge deal of
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 fumes or emissions. In conclusion,
while
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traveling
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food
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 thousands of miles lead to both positive and negative impact, I believe that all the outcomes of the change have been negative.

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