Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times in most people’s life others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Happiness is more important for every
life
of humans which are passing from childhood to oldest. ,,
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Moreover
we took a lot of enjoyment from our adolescent Add a comma
,Moreover
life
and it becomes in fulfilled to
adult Change preposition
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life
. Mostly I believe that teenage life
is more effective; who are spends those ways.
Firstly
, I want to discuss of younger aged life
which we were passed from our life
. We know kids learned different wisdom in childhood and they also
suffered from mistakes; It helped them to make confident and successful humans. For example
, after the exam ,results
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inresults
fromresults
we
faced the condition of marks; those happened Correct pronoun usage
apply
due to
lack of practice but when they got some good suggestions from his/her teacher then
they realise and got success in the next exam. So in my , opinion thes
younger Correct your spelling
this
life
is grateful for every human life
.
Secondly
, the vast majority of people argue that,
every stage of Remove the comma
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life
has ups and downs according to
the situation; the happiest moment comes with money, time and sacrifice. this
combo of requirements can come in situations of life
. For ,instance this
life
we got economical freedom from parents help
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to help
them
and do not ask for pocket money; they hangouts with friends outside and have long drives by car Correct pronoun usage
us
then
they can not face any restrictions from their guardians.
To sum up
, for the whole file of segments we passed in different ways; we got a different types
of happiness in each section of Correct the article-noun agreement
different types
a different type
life
. I personally agree that adult life
is most enjoyable for the whole of life
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