Cricket has become more popular than national sports in the subcontinent countries. what do you think are the reasons behind this?
During
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the collonial
collonial
period England Correct your spelling
colonial
has
brought Cricekt to the subcontinentUnnecessary verb
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,
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since
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and since
then
many people started playing the game
. I
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the
recent times Correct article usage
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cricekt
has gained moment and Correct your spelling
cricket
became
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become
more
popular Correct article usage
a more
game
than national sports, in this
essay I shall discuss reasons
behind Correct article usage
the reasons
this
.
To embark upon, fan
base for Add an article
the fan
cricket
has
spiked suddenly when the Indian team won Unnecessary verb
apply
1983
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the 1983
world
cup, as nobody thought Kapil Devl
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Devl's
lead
team would win Replace the word
led
againest
the mighty West Indies in the final. More Correct your spelling
against
over
the Change preposition
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game
itself is more engaging than any other game
like kabadi
or football, so its Correct your spelling
kabaddi
popularity
in India has became
increasing year Change the verb form
become
on
year. Change preposition
after
Initially
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,Initially
game
was played only in test format
, but as this
format
takes five days to complete the ICC introduced one day format
which eventually led to ODI
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the ODI
world
cup. As the
time progressed T20 Correct article usage
apply
format
came into existense
. Correct your spelling
existence
T20
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The T20
formate
took down TRP ratings for broadcasters and became Correct your spelling
format
most
pleasing Add an article
the most
format
of the game
. Perhaps, cricket
is the only game
in the world
that is
played in three formats.
In India as popularity
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the popularity
for
T20 increased BCCI started IPL in 2007, Change preposition
of
eventually
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,eventually
this
league became one of the most watched sport
in the Change to a plural noun
sports
world
. This
led to more and more people started
playing Wrong verb form
starting
as well as
watching the game
. Cricketers like Sachin Tendulkar, Virat Kohli etc became sports persons with most
fan base in the Add an article
a most
the most
world
. The rise of cricket
is not only limited to India even across the world
its popularity
is increasing. In the past
only 8-10 Add a comma
,past
countiries
used to represent Correct your spelling
countries
in
the Change preposition
apply
world
cup, but in the
recent times Correct article usage
apply
this
has increased to 14.
In conclusion, I would say that cricket
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cricket's
popularity
will remain same
and be one of the most loved Correct article usage
the same
sport
in the subcontinent.Change to a plural noun
sports
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