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Some people think that printed books are no longer necessary in this digital era as all writing can be stored electronically. Others think that printed books still play important roles. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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 it is argued by some
people
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 that printed
books
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 are no longer required
due to
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 the fact that
books
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 can be stored digitally in
this
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 modern era, others are of the opinion that
books
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 that are printed still play significant roles.
This
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 essay will discuss both sides of the debate and convey my opinion in the conclusion.
To begin
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 with,The primary
reason
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 appears to be with the advance of technology many software manage digital
books
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 in the technological era.
For example
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, software
such
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 as Microsoft word,google drive and external drives are the popular storage methods that are currently available, which
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 have a huge storage capacity.In
such
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 scenarios,students or
people
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 who want to access
books
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 do not need to carry bundles of
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 in their bag rather they can access them from storage devices and internet drives, which might the
reason
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 why they argue printed
books
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 are no longer required.
On the other hand
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, the
reason
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 for the latter argument seems that the reading habit is on the verge of extinction.
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,recently, Time of India a well-known new channel conducted a survey in India and published a report, which states only 5% of
people
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 have reading habits in 2022. They found the
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 for
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 is many students are distracted by the internet and mobile phones
due to
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this
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 they have almost paused their reading habits and spent their valuable time on the internet.By considering
this
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, why do
people
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 advocate that printed
books
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 still play a crucial role
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 In conclusion,
although
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 there convincing
reason
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 for the former argument, I think printed
books
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 contribute to the reading habit, which is crucial for students to read or study without any distraction.
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