A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: tell your friend you understand the problem explain what happened to you in the past suggest a possible solution to this problem.

Dear Roger, I hope
this
letter finds you well. Guess what! I had the same problem which you
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mentioned
in your
last
letter. As you know, the
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of Product Manager gives
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you new challenges
everyday
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and
calculate
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your team capacity is one of them. In order to
dont't
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don't
make
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in your next month, you can
mensure
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measure
ensure
the expectation of hours to deliver your demand and divide it by the sum of hours that your team can work during
this
period.
Although
this
math looks simple, it is necessary to consider that your employees don't produce 100% of the time
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they
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suppose
spouse
to. What I mean
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it is that during their days, there are pauses to eating,
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to
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and so on. That was my mistake in the past, when I did
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analyse, I forgot
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unproductive time, and because of it, the numbers said that I would need 50%
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people to do the job. I look forward to hearing
you
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with
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your opinion and the result of your solution. Best regards, Franklin.
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