Happiness is generally considered to be the most important achievement in life. What exactly is happiness? How can people find happiness?

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It is often thought that
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happiness
is the best thing for life. From my point of view,
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feeling happy is abstract, one can reach it easily whenever
they
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want which I will explain in
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essay. First of all, we can not describe easily to
happiness
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because of the fact that it is only related to feeling.
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,
people
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who remember bad
experience
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feel unhappy.
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, a good past provides
happiness
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. Second of all,
happiness
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depends on
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people
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people's
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perspectives. Namely, some
people
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might be happy with small things, but others live in
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inadequate conditions.
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,
according to
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many studies, when
people
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look for their
happiness
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, they may be unhappy.
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,
happiness
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is
very
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important
things
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, yet we can not explain
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it quicly
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quicly
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quickly
.
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, If we mention
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how can we find and reach the
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happiness
. It is
clearly
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that it changes
according to
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many factors.
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,
whereas
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some
of
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people
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the people
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earn a lot of money and feel happy, others could not feel good even if money.
In addition
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to
this
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,
people
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who try to go
high
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to high
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position
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may find
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happiness
after levels of
carrier
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the carrier
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.
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, we know that
,
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minority
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a minority
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of
population
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the population
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might be happy with small things
such
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as
sunrise
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the sunrise
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of
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in
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morning
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the morning
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and walking on the beach.
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,
we
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it seems that it
is
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changes to different situations and depends on
people
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's life window. In conclusion, even though we can not discuss easily and find it, it is
very
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important goal to reach
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happines
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happiness
for many
people
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. If
people
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try to get happy, it will be beneficial for society.
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