the diagram belows show the process by which paper is manufactured and recycled summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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display

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the process of manufacturing and recycling

paper

. How

paper

is made and recycled. It is not a short step to make

paper

because some actions

needed

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are needed

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to produce

paper

from a bunch of trees and

then

recycling

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recycle

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it.

First,

the trees

is

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are

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being sewed in a lumber mill to become logs. After logs

was

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were

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created,

the

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they

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logs

is

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are

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being sent to

pulping

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the pulping

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centre. In the pulping centre,

material

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a material

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made from crushed wood--called

pulp

being created. The

pulp

be

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sent to a place called

paper-making

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a paper-making

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plant to produce

paper

press

then

finally

paper

being

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created. The recycling process of

paper

is start

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with

paper

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the paper

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being carried on a recycling truck to the place that

provide

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shredding

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a shredding

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machine. The crushed

paper

is

being

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apply

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sent to a recycling plant to be

pulp

.

Then

,

pulp

be

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sent again to the place that can produce

paper

press before recycled

paper

being

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created.