Some people think that zoos are cruel and all zoos should be closed. However, some people think zoos can help protect animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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In the current world,

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like to go to

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, especially children. Many

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say that

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are very cruel because

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live in a cage,

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others are against it since numerous animal species protect from extinction. I agree that

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can help save

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and should not be closed.

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essay will discuss both perspectives and explain why I think like that. One of the reasons for closing

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animals

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have to live in cages. All livestock need to live freely, and if they live in

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a place without their families, they will die

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especially bird species.

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, birds live without flying, and after many times, birds forget their ability to fly.

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are built which are in urban places, their purpose is entertainment, and generally, they become the first choice when

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get bored.

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circumstance is very cruel, so

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support closing

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have several advantages, which are saving

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from extinction and

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living time longer in

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. First of all, numerous species of

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are dangerous because of human activities.

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create to save these kinds of

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as polar bears, lions etc.

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, many surveys show that

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live long in

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because of good caring.

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, lions have daily programs when their feeding or washing time.

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, their life is controlled by vets. From my point of view,

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are very special and good places for

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except built for fun and profit.

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, I supported natural

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, which are made in natural habitats

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as forests or deserts. In

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way,

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do not need to go far away from their habitats. In conclusion, everything that has been stated so far,

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's ideas get separated into two-point about

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. On the one hand,

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should be closed because

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live in cages.

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are built to live

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longer and healthy.

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Topic Vocabulary:

animal welfare
conservation
captive breeding
habitat
ethical issues
zoochosis
endangered species
genetic diversity
reintroduction programs
wildlife education
sanctuary
natural living conditions
artificial environments
behavioral enrichment
ecosystem

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Some people think that zoos are cruel and all zoos should be closed. However, some people think zoos can help protect animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

some people feel that free time is something valuable.