ou should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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In recent days people are developing more garbage in their

sourroundings

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surroundings

and

that is

all happening in rural areas,

city

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the city

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outskirts and in some villages. In

this

topic,

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am going to

expalin

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explain

what are the measures should our government take on

this

garabge

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garbage

disposal.

Firstly

, I would like to explain

you

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to you

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about

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apply

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how the

enviroment

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environment

is getting polluted and people are suffering

with

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from

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this waste products

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this waste product

these waste products

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discarding. In

olden

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the olden

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days, everyone used

threadbags

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thread bags

or dried leaves bags for carrying various things. But now we are all using plastic bags and throwing

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them in

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soil, water or in

drinages

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drainages

drainage

. So that these substances will not degrade into

soil

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the soil

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quickly and may cause soil

erosins

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erosion

erosions

Although

, governments

takes

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take

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the

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apply

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precaution

instead

of plastic bags to use paper covers.

For instance

, our administration charges fines for the persons who are using these

un degradable

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undegradable

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things.

secondly

, coming to our discussion debris should be discarded in the dustbins containing some degradable containers and should be dropped far from our

sourroundings

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surroundings

. Actually,

administration

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the administration

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did a change for collecting the garbage

everyday

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every day

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mornings

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morning

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and appointed some members for that particular work. they use to gather all the rubbish material and

drops

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drop

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very

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it very

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long from the cities and towns. Because, if you drop

besdie

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beside

or near to our houses it may

produces

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produce

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unwanted odours , mosquitos and houseflies which contaminates our food and causes various diseases.

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, malaria is

the

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commom

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common

fever in which

person

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a person

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suffers for a

longer

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long

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time

due to

mosquitoes.

Moreover

, the

childerns

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children

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who stays

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stays

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stay

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near

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apply

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those hazards will be affected very easily.

To conclude

this

discussion, to reduce these mistakes done by humans government should form some rules like

who

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those who

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do these things should be

ounishedd

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punished

legally like fines, or conducting some warning sections and save the environment.

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