Some people think that city planners should create more green spaces and plant trees. Others believe that they should focus on building new homes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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maintain various views about whether more buildings or green

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should be prioritized in urban

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many argue that more residential

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should be constructed, I believe that planting

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and forming more green sites might be beneficial in terms of

air

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pollution

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and

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’s well-being and healthy lifestyle. On the one hand, the reasons why some

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contend that the construction of a lot of

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to live is the best choice are multiple. First and foremost, in today’s world, the high population in

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is one of the concerns that make

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struggle with finding living

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. To be more precise,

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who move to

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due to

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jobs or education might not find accommodation to settle in. Taking Glasgow,

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, is one of the

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which welcomes every year thousands of students, and students frequently complain about fewer residential

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, building new houses might decrease flat or house prices.

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, since

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mainly reside in

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, fees become higher owing to a lack of houses, and

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are not likely to afford them. If there are several options in terms of accommodation, landlords might reduce their prices to attract customers.

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, I share the opinion of those who believe that constructors should allocate more greenery

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of buildings.

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, green parks and

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are essential to preventing

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pollution

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in urban

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. In the cutting-edge world, it should be acknowledged that the urban population struggles with

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pollution

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of crowds and exhaust fumes released from vehicles.

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, it would be more reasonable if constructors expanded the green spaces and the number of

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in order to restrict

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pollution

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and provide fresh

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in

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.

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, citizens might be benefited from having a lot of green playgrounds, tall

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green parks. Precisely, in the state-of-the-art period, running, walking, taking fresh

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, and playing with peers

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vitally important for societies’ well-being.

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,

the more green

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the more green area's cities

the cities of the more green area

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cities

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have, the healthier their society is. In conclusion, even though some individuals argue that new houses should be built more, I believe that settling in green zones and growing

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would enable the prevention of

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pollution

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and raise the health rate among

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.