The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The diagram outlines the principal stages in
milk
production Use synonyms
as well as
the manufacture of other Linking Words
dairy
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products
.
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Milk
production begins with a herd of Use synonyms
dairy
cows grazing on grass and ends with Use synonyms
dairy
Use synonyms
products
being purchased by consumers.
As previously stated, the initial stage in the process is cows feeding on grass in a field. Twice a day, the cows are taken from the pasture to a milking facility where they are milked by an automated milking machine. The resulting Use synonyms
milk
is kept fresh in large refrigerated storage tanks. On a daily basis, the Use synonyms
milk
is collected by a Use synonyms
milk
tanker and transported to a Use synonyms
dairy
factory where Use synonyms
further
processes are applied to it in order to create a range of Linking Words
products
.
Some of the Use synonyms
milk
is pasteurized – heat-treated to kill any harmful bacteria – Use synonyms
while
the rest is converted into other Linking Words
dairy
Use synonyms
products
: cheese, cream, and butter. Ultimately, the finished Use synonyms
dairy
Use synonyms
products
are transported to shops and supermarkets where they may be purchased by the general public.Use synonyms
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