The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The diagram outlines the principal stages in
milk
production as well as
the manufacture of other dairy
products
.
Milk
production begins with a herd of dairy
cows grazing on grass and ends with dairy
products
being purchased by consumers.
As previously stated, the initial stage in the process is cows feeding on grass in a field. Twice a day, the cows are taken from the pasture to a milking facility where they are milked by an automated milking machine. The resulting milk
is kept fresh in large refrigerated storage tanks. On a daily basis, the milk
is collected by a milk
tanker and transported to a dairy
factory where further
processes are applied to it in order to create a range of products
.
Some of the milk
is pasteurized – heat-treated to kill any harmful bacteria – while
the rest is converted into other dairy
products
: cheese, cream, and butter. Ultimately, the finished dairy
products
are transported to shops and supermarkets where they may be purchased by the general public.Submitted by adilkhanov.mdr on
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