The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant. Write at least 150 words.
A glance at the line graph provided reveals the data concerning tourist
visitors
namely in the Caribbean Island
from 2010 to 2017.
Regarding the number
of tourists
on the island
, it remained the same in the first two years, accounting for approximately 0.75 million
. Following
this
, this
data moderately increased and flatten out to around 1.5 million
in 2015. In 2016, the number
of visitors
staying on the island
decreased by 0.25 million
, after then
it increased by the same quantity in the next year
.
Moving to the number
of visitors
staying on cruise ships, it slightly grew in 2011, making up almost 0.5 million
and declined in the following year
by half. After then
, this
number
significantly increased during the remaining years, which accounted for about 2 million
in 2017. Moreover
, the total number
of visitors
saw steady growth from 2010 to 2016, after which increased rapidly from 2.75 to 3.5 million
in the latter year
.
Overall
, the number
of tourists
staying on the island
was at the top in 2010, while
that on cruise ships was at the bottom. In the last
year
, the tourists
on cruise ships outnumbered that on the island
. In general, the total number
of tourists
experienced an upward trend.Submitted by adilkhanov.mdr on
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