Some people say the government should give healthcare the first priority, some others believe there are more important priorities to spend the tax payers' money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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some people believe that

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is the major priority that the

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should focus on, others argue that there are thousands of issues more emergency and need more subsidies from the

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. Personally, I firmly agree with the former idea for one main reason. Those who state that other issues are more important than

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the fact that each person has good health conditions, they still are hard to make ends meet and have challenging lives. The

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should invest in

education

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since lots of well-paid jobs require high

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, which

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limited to upper-class people .

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, it is obvious that

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technology industry which is the most popular field around the current world demands for high-educated people .

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, those who do not receive well

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but have

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are not qualified for these jobs and are hard to survive in society.

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,

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everyone has good

healthcare

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, many job opportunities require not only good body conditions but

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well

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education

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.

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, others

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me argue that receiving completed

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is

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basic human right. When the public does not get good

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conditions , it is definitely a tough challenge for them to survive in the world. Take, Taiwan,

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. Taiwan is well known for

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health security. Each citizen is able to see doctors

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price which means the

government

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and inhabitants agree that

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is the first priority in society. In conclusion, there is no doubt that the

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should emphasize

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the most because

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basic human right. To summarize, as far as I am concerned, I believe that

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is the first priority of the

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of tax

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the fact that having healthy bodies is

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basic human right,

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others argue that other issues like

education

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are much more important than

healthcare

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since despite of having healthy bodies, it is still a challenge to survive without other supports from the

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