The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates different stages of recycling discarded
plastic
bottles
. Overall
, there are several steps in recycling plastic
bottles
, beginning with the collection of waste bottles
and ending with producing various products.
Firstly
, a large trash can is used to deposit the discarded plastic
bottles
. After the waste bottles
are collected, they are loaded in a truck to be transported to recycling centres. Following
this
, the bottles
are sorted based on some requirements. Furthermore
, once meeting the requirements, the bottles
are compressed into blocks.
Afterwards, these blocks are crushed with two large grinders, leaving them in small pieces which are fed directly to washing storage. Next,
the clean pieces are poured into a machine in order to produce plastic
pallets. Finally
, these pallets are heated to form raw material which is ready to be shaped in
various forms, Change preposition
into
such
as plastic
containers, water bottles
, plastic
bags, pens, and many others.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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