These days, an increasing number of people from many cities know little about their neighbors and do not have a sense of community. What do you think are the causes and what solutions can you suggest?
Today, it is very common for us to see more and more city dwellers who do not know their
neighbours
and communities. This
essay will discuss the factors contributing to this
trend, followed by measures to address this
problem.
The issue is caused by several reasons, but the main reason is fierce competition at work. To begin
with, there is no doubt that competition at work has become more intense than before. In order to secure their position and be promoted, people
need to spend extra time
learning new skills, which means they don't have time
to spend on other aspects of life, such
as social life. As a result
, they may feel alienated from the people
living in their communities and feel less community-like. Secondly
, people
have become used to communicating via the Internet. Consequently
, they do not have sufficient exposure to face-to-face communication in real-life situations, such
as interacting with their neighbours
, resulting in a lack of community support.
There are several measures that can be taken to address this
problem. It is necessary for the government to generate more employment opportunities with a better work-life balance so that people
's pressure at the office can be relieved, thus
providing them with more free time
to participate in community activities, such
as glamping with neighbours
. In the meantime, individuals should be encouraged to reduce their Internet time
by providing more engaging outdoor activities.
In conclusion, based on the above analysis and evidence, intense competition at work and Internet addiction are the two main reasons for estrangement between neighbours
and communities. In my opinion, this
problem can be solved by generating more jobs and providing more outdoor activities.Submitted by wly_yanwang on
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