The number of people who choose to get married is likely to be lower in the future than that is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Married is arguably one of the
most
oldest Change the adjective
apply
tradition
that Change to a plural noun
traditions
ever
been to happen in Add a missing verb
has ever
the
human history. In Correct article usage
apply
the
recent years, certain Correct article usage
apply
of
Change preposition
apply
people
believed that younger generations are not interested anymore Use synonyms
to
that tradition. Change preposition
in
This
scenery could be seen in some developed Linking Words
country
like England, Fix the agreement mistake
countries
USA
, and Japan Correct article usage
the USA
due to
the plummeting of marital status. But, it is happening around the globe, or it is just in some Linking Words
countries
?
There are two main variables that are becoming Use synonyms
a
determinant Correct article usage
apply
variable
of Fix the agreement mistake
variables
marriage
. Use synonyms
Firstly
, Linking Words
nation
law is one of the Replace the word
national
mosts
major things to be considered for Correct your spelling
most
Use synonyms
people
choices to Change noun form
people's
be marry
their partner or not. Change the verb form
marry
For instance
, some nations required their citizens to be married Linking Words
first,
before could have a child. Linking Words
Hence
, Linking Words
people
that want to have a child in those Use synonyms
countries
should be married, and it Use synonyms
keep
the Change the verb form
keeps
marriage
rates still high.
Use synonyms
Second
variable that definitely Change the article
The second
have
Change the verb form
has
positive
correlation with Add an article
a positive
marriage
is religion. In some religions, they prohibited men and women to have sex outside Use synonyms
Use synonyms
marriage
. In Change preposition
of marriage
more
strict Correct article usage
a more
case
, in Fix the agreement mistake
cases
Change the capitalization
Islam
islam
it is prohibited for couples to touch each other before Add a comma
,islam
marriage
. Use synonyms
This
kind of Linking Words
things
makes religious Fix the agreement mistake
thing
people
treat married as the only healthy way to have a relationship with the other gender. Use synonyms
Therefore
, Linking Words
majority
of religious Correct article usage
the majority
people
Use synonyms
are
still have Unnecessary verb
apply
high
likelihood to get married.
In conclusion, Add an article
a high
although
Linking Words
in
some developed Change preposition
apply
countries
have shrinking Use synonyms
marriage
rates. Plenty of nations are still Use synonyms
treated
Wrong verb form
treating
Linking Words
this
Correct determiner usage
these
tradtitions
as their necessities and married traditions Correct your spelling
traditions
tradition
is
still continued by their younger generations. Because of that, we can conclude that the amount of Change the verb form
are
people
that still want to Use synonyms
married
is only declining in Change the verb
marry
few
Correct article usage
a few
countries
, and in Use synonyms
the
most Correct article usage
apply
of
places the Change preposition
apply
marriage
rates will Use synonyms
be remain
even increasing.Change the verb form
remain
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