Environemntal issues such as climate changehave always been an international problem because governments are not imposing harsh punishments against offenders. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Support your answer with specific reasons and examples.

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Climate change is one of the concerning problems
this
modern era has given birth to. A sea of suggestions and policies has been put forward by numerous nations. The following essay will delve into my complete disagreement with the notion that
this
issue is global
due to
the lack of strict policies against wrongdoers.
First,
in order to solve a problem it is crucial to understand how did it begin. The fundamental reason is usually believed to be the unrestricted usage of fossil fuels by humanity that releases toxic gases into the atmosphere.
However
, new gathered data is coming into effect that challenges these factors.
For instance
, volcanic eruptions that happened in the past two years have released more detrimental gases into the environment than
due to
the amount of non-renewable resources burnt until now.
Consequently
,
this
makes us question who to reasonably blame – humanity or nature.
Moreover
, even though today’s innovation is promising about clean energy it comes with a high price. And the ideas find unfit for an average family’s pocket.
For example
, Tesla electric cars are seven times more expensive than a decent affordable family car. If unreasonable laws and rules come into effect it definitely would not be something that an average family would have priority for.
Instead
of punishment, authorities should educate people about the limited access to the fuels we use every day and try to make the transition affordable for everyone.
To conclude
, despite being completely on the other side of the ring in terms of applying harsh rules for climate change, I do
however
hold a strong position in support of
this
fact in terms of local pollution if not the global solution.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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