Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Education is a treasure which can never be stolen

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destroyed. Nowadays, few college and university

offers

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courses online

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students could attend e-learning sessions. I am with the former statement and

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views in upcoming paragraphs. Indeed,

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online us in trending nowadays. There are numerous benefits related to it.

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helps a person to watch, learn and practise sessions online from home. It

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time

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as well as

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it

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money.

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, if a student

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to poor family background

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can not afford fees for higher education.

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, it is beneficial for them and

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they can do

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job in their leisure

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.

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,

online

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study

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provides less

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accommodation

and travel charges. Students do not need to go to

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place

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to

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their courses.

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, during

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the pandemic

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'corona' when

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the lockdown

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problem was faced by every individual, online

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is

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option to attend classes at home to get safety from

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.

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it

solve

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the problem of travelling from one place to another to

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.

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, few courses need to be offline or

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face-to-face

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discussion

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discussions

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with tutors. These e-learning methods puts a negative impact on communication between teachers and students. To cite an example, if a juvenile has

doubt

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or some

question

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questions

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about topics. They cannot properly talk to teachers or

sometime

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teachers did not pay attention to all

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juveniles

in

online

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an online

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session

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sessions

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,

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in a classroom a lecturer or a student

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to ask their doubts

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in

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leisure

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. In conclusion,

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e-learning

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some negative effect,

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I firmly believe that many positive effects can

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seen

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in

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modern era.