The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram describes whole the process of producing
sugar
from sugar
cane. In total, there are 7 stages of production, starting from growing the sugar
canes up to ready-to-consume sugar
.
Firstly
, sugar
cones need to be grown, this
usually takes one to one and a half years. When they are fully grown, either a specifically designed machine harvests them or it is done by hand – each sugar
cone is cut with a blade slightly above the ground.
The collected sugar
cones are then
crushed using a special wheel-powered machine, which produces a juice, which is purified by employing a limestone filter. Applying heat to the filtered juice, in an evaporator, removes liquidity and transforms it into syrup. Which is put into a centrifuge that can disentangle sugar
crystals from the syrup. In the last
step, the sugar
is dried and cooled in a special barrel.Submitted by manekiyaadil on
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