Q. More and more people are shifting to cities from countryside. Does this have advantages or disadvantages on environment?

There is no denying the fact that the main environmental effect of public
imigaration
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immigration
migration
from villages to cities
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arguable. In
this
essay, I shall describe both advantages and disadvantages and explain my point of
views
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. There are
people
who argue that the environmental
beniefits
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benefits
of settling down in the cities considerably
outweight
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outweigh
it
is disadvantages
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. The main reason for believing
this
is that
this
community may use another type of transportation.
For instance
, the authority
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have
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build
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a railway which makes it more
convenience
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for
population
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the population
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to use it,
where
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it hase
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hase
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has
decrease
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risk
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on
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pollution.
In addition
, the high number of
public
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might help in the development of the
city
. Indeed,
this
makes it clear that
environment
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will not be impacted by community immigration.
On the other hand
, there are
people
who believe that
environment
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may harmfully influence by
such
act
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.
people
often say that increasing the
number of
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population in the cities will raise the total waste.
Therefore
, the
environment
will suffer deeply. To illustrate, a
prestegious
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prestigious
journal article published that 30% of the
city
waste
were
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grew since the huge increase in the number of
city
immigrant
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immigrants
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.
Thus
, it
become
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apparent that the more
people
who live in the
city
side will affect the
environment
in
dangerous
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way. In conclusion, both arguments have a
merite
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merit
. On balance,
however
, I believe that the negative
outweigh
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the positive.
Hence
, requires more attention.
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