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Some people insist that the world would be a better place if everyone spoke the same language. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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There are many countries on
this
 planet, and every resident in each nation uses different languages. Some people might say it will lead to various advantages if everyone on the earth unifies
language
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, but I strongly urge we should preserve our own languages. It is true that using only
one
language
 can lead to a better life. A world without a
language
 barrier can allow people to communicate freely so that everyone in
this
 world can have a conversation easily. Whether you travel or study overseas, we can manage random conflicts spontaneously during a life journey. It can
also
 help to get rid of anxiety and frustration which are common feelings that happen all the time when we talk to foreigners.
Nevertheless
, these arguments can only be made to a certain point. Even if there is no
language
 barrier, misunderstandings and conflicts do exist between
one
-to-
one
.
This
 is because communication includes the elements of non-verbal factors
such
 as sympathy, intimacy and comprehension beyond
language
 itself.
In addition
, most of all,
language
 represents
one
 country’s identity. A
language
 which has been developed gradually for
over
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thousands of years is
one
 of the main sources of national pride.
This
 means if we use only
one
language
, there is no
different
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with
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 eliminating a number of traditions and cultures of various countries.
Also
, our curiosity and desire to discover another culture will be gone. Eventually, the world we are living in will become boring and lame. In conclusion, I absolutely disagree with the opinion that it would be much more convenient if we spoke the same
language
,
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 because cultural diversity is far more significant than the efficiency of
language
.
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