The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.

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The diagrams present the replacement that has been happening in West

park

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Secondary

School

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in different stages in 1950, 1980 and 2010. In all three images can be seen that the

school

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did not change its location.

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, during

this

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area the

school

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has increased in size and the car

park

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has been created and enlarged. The combined recreational areas,

however

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, first extended and

then

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reduced in size. In 1950, the

school

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was built close to the main road and next to a number of houses. A large area behind the

school

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was turned into a

playground

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and to the ,left there was farmland. By 1980, the houses had been demolished in order to make some space for a new car

park

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and an additional

school

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building, which become a science block.

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to that, the farmland had been replaced with a sports field,

while

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the main road and

playground

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had not any changes. In 2010, the

school

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building remained unchanged but the car

park

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was extended to cover the entire sports field.

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, the original

playground

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has been divided into two so that it provided some space for the sports field and the new

playground

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Vocabulary: Replace the words park, school, playground with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

197 words

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The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.

Research has shown that spending less time in the office can reduce the use of energy (for example, electricity, gas). Thus some companies close for some days a week. Do this advantage of this development outhweight the disadvantage.

Eco-tourism usually involves people visiting remote areas. Some poeple think this will have a negative impact on local cultures and communities. What are they? how can they be overcome?

Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The best way to reduce crime among young people is to teach parents good parenting skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and examples agree = main reason, some wrong disagree = environment, old