The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.

The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.
The diagrams present the replacement that has been happening in West
park
Secondary
School
in different stages in 1950, 1980 and 2010. In all three images can be seen that the
school
did not change its location.
Overall
, during
this
area the
school
has increased in size and the car
park
has been created and enlarged. The combined recreational areas,
however
, first extended and
then
reduced in size. In 1950, the
school
was built close to the main road and next to a number of houses. A large area behind the
school
was turned into a
playground
and to the ,left there was farmland. By 1980, the houses had been demolished in order to make some space for a new car
park
and an additional
school
building, which become a science block.
In addition
to that, the farmland had been replaced with a sports field,
while
the main road and
playground
had not any changes. In 2010, the
school
building remained unchanged but the car
park
was extended to cover the entire sports field.
Therefore
, the original
playground
has been divided into two so that it provided some space for the sports field and the new
playground
.
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