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Plastics and chemicals are becoming threat to the planet. Discuss its reasons and solution.

#plastics #chemicals #threat #planet
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todays
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today's
world
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 the consumption of
plastic
 and other hazardous chemicals has drastically increased by
the
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humans to produce goods and carry
their
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out their
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day to day
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 tasks which has ultimately
depeleted
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depleted
the
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our living standards and has caused
negative
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a negative
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 impact on
environment
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the environment
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. Causing pollution, low quality of fertile soil and global warming. The increase
of
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plastic
 use can be pointed to the increasing population and lack of education provided by the government on recycling and procedures
of
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disposing
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plastic
 waste.
This
 has affected the environment and
casued
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caused
high
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 risk of health issues like cancer,
asthama
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asthma
 and heart
diseases
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disease
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. Lack of knowledge about
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disposal procedure of
plastic
 has
also
 affected the fertility of the soil because of which farmers have to use
hazardous
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a hazardous
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chemical
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chemicals
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 to produce crops which results in causing health issues among the youth. The government should implement mandatory classes in societies and schools which educates the end users on
correct
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the correct
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 disposal of
plastic
 products and
packagings
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. Apart, from that government should
also
 invest in biodegradable and
photodegredable
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photodegradable
packagings
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 so, that
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