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Some people believe that space exploration is beneficial to humanity. Others, however, think that it is useless. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #space #exploration #humanity
n the modern world is crucial to be able to speak English, but, is it possible to learn it on your own? In my opinion, nowadays there are loads of resources to help through your study,
such
 as videos and courses, that made becoming almost as good as a native speaker only using books easy. I believe that with a good amount of ,goodwill everyone is able to learn English from scratch not needing a tutor.
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 it is possible to find videos that, watching not only topics that were not explained clearly in books get more accessible, but
also
 listening skills are improved. Albeit, it is easy to look for people that share the interest in learning
this
 idiom, with whom is possible to practice speaking.
For example
,
while
 I was getting ready to take the IELTS test I joined multiple online film discussion groups, so, I could get better at holding a conversation and finding out new things about something I love. A second way, to increase your English skills is to travel. Travelling I was able to learn the language in a completely different method, in fact, by going abroad I was able to understand how much easier it is to accomplish the goal,
due to
 the need to use the idiom for everyday life needs.
For example
, going grocery shopping made me realize how helpful was the vocabulary read in the books and
also
 helped me to find a method to apply to real necessities . In conclusion, I think that it might be easier to work with a teacher helping, even though, with enough ,effort everybody is able to get good at the British idiom.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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