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Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#countries #refugees #assistance #food
Rich countries should welcome and accept poor
people
such
 as displaced
people
 and help them by providing essential sources like food and places to set. I strongly agree because the nation will get a lot of benefits
such
 as avoiding the spreading of diseases and making their
people
 get good manners by being
a good role models
Correct the article-noun agreement
a good role model
good role models
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 for them. The first reason why wealthy nations should help refugees is to avoid outbreaks of specific diseases. Without helping those
people
 and leaving them in a dangerous or awful place with no food eventually they will get sick and develop
such
 diseases that might spread all over nations and make an epidemic crisis.
For example
, the percentage of homeless increased, and based on a study conducted in the United States said that most horrible illness starts with vulnerable
people
such
 as the homeless and progress all over the nation. The second reason is to be a good role model for their
people
.
In other words
, when a specific country provides help to refugees they will import amazing manners to their citizens.
For example
, make them be there for poor humans and help others with love and without getting benefits from them except that they will be proud of themselves
as well as
 their nation. In conclusion, all countries must provide assistance for other populations
such
 as refugees because by helping them they will take important advantages like banning some illnesses from outbreaks and letting their citizens be proud of them and try to be like them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Refugees
  • Asylum seekers
  • Humanitarian aid
  • Integration
  • Multiculturalism
  • Economic impact
  • Public services
  • International law
  • Conventions relating to the status of refugees
  • Labor market
  • Cultural enrichment
  • Burden-sharing
  • Resettlement programs
  • Host country
  • Border security
  • Comprehensive policy
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