Nowadays, people are not as fit and active as they used to be in the past which creates health issues in the long-run. Why do you think this is? What measures can be taken to solve this problem?
In present-day cities
this
contemporary epoch,there is a heated argument over the issue thatChange preposition
in
this
modern era,individuals are not physically fit and active rather than
Change preposition
to
previous
Change preposition
in previous
time
which creates health problems in the long run.I fully support Fix the agreement mistake
times
this
given mentioned phenomenon.However
,supporting points will be elaborate
on in the upcoming paragraph with a logical conclusion.
There is adequate evidence for Correct your spelling
elaborated
this
view which is substantially the first and foremost reason is the development of new technology such
as Ola, and Food Grab.Additionally
Add a comma
,
are become
smart cities in Change to the active voice
become
have become
this
way an individual gets a lot of benefit from this
smart world they can book online taxi on their smartphones to go from one place to another so the masses are not need
to walk so far and they become lazy and unfit.Adding more to it nowadays individuals buy their houses and apartment near the metro station in smart cities so they can travel easily from one place to another.
Probing ahead in Change the verb form
do not need
this
generation
every individual uses a smartphone, or laptop to make their lifestyle easy.Moreover
,with the help of mobile phone
,Fix the agreement mistake
phones
apps
they can choose their food and what they want to eat and order as well.Correct word choice
and apps
Besides
that
some pupils are very lazy after they came back from school they use to watch TV and play video games the whole day so they are not preferred to go out and play outdoor activities.Add a comma
,that
Initially
,young generation
people are not preferred to do physical exercise like yoga,meditation and so on which creates health issues in their lifestyle.
To conclude
,well according to
my opinion individual are not fit and fine acting in this
present generation
no dought old generation
peoples are more stronger and active as compared to now.However
, government
should have to hold some Add an article
the government
campaign
to make them active and fit.Fix the agreement mistake
campaigns
Submitted by sharma1997.rahulthakur on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.