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Each country cesnsors the media in one way or the other. What are the pros and cons of censorship in the media?

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 television or any publishing can have a noticeable impact on the majority of the population,
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 is common for authorities that assess the media's production.censoring can cause some advantages and following that some drawbacks which will be discussed in
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, on one hand, some products
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 as series or movies or even magazines regardless of paper base or digital can aware people of the social or political issues in their societies which were hidden by authority or some groups of politicians.
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, they can reveal news which was not supposed to be announced comprehensively to avert anyone protesting against the government.
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, in some communities profiteers try to make rumours about the price of goods by publishing them via social networks or even newspapers to prove that the news is reliable.so the media's assessment allows authorities to prevent any prospective chaos out of the public's awareness of facts happening in their communities.
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, the press or any social network can spread some commonplace ideas or belief or shows some videos or images that are not appropriate for all ages likely children and teenager,so there should be some organisations that assess all the products that were produced for television or any social media.
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 some movies are incompatible for younger children since they can teach them violation.
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, there are some videos which are included ethical and sexual problems that authorities should not allow the producer to show them easily with no limitations.
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 restrictions by governments on social television have some disadvantages, ignoring the benefits of
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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