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Traffic jams are a problem for individuals to use roads freely in major cities. What problems does it have for individuals? How individuals can reduce traffic?

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With the development of major cities
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jams
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 are becoming trouble almost every city has to confront them.Overpopulation and automobiles are the biggest cause of
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 disturbing phenomenon and bring inconvenience to citizen's life.
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 problem persists
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 potential resolutions which individuals could implement. There are numerous reasons why
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 issue of
traffic
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jams
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 is growing .
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traffic
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jams
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 are caused by too many vehicles on the road.
People
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 always give preference to private vehicles
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 of public transport. Individuals
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 their cars, motorcycles or any other vehicle to go to
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. 
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 is the main cause of
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jams
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 in the morning or evening time.
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 leads to
people
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 always being late to
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 and less productive, because they waste so many hours on the road when they should
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 that time in their
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 to get growth in business.
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, there are many solutions that individuals should take to reduce
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 congestion. The most effective way is to
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 public transport
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 as buses,trains and the metro. If
people
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 commute to their
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 using buses or trains, there will be an obvious reduction in the number of private cars on the road. Another measure that citizens can take is carpooling.
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 with the help of ,technology lots of things are online, so
people
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 can pay their electric, water and other bills online.
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, In my ,hometown
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 pay their bills on their own
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 of online due lack of knowledge.
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 problem leads to increase
traffic
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.
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, There are lots of things that regular
people
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 reduce
traffic
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jams
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. The most important ones are to limit the
use
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 of private cars and avoid unnecessary things.

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