The graph below shows tourism statistics among Venezuelian students from 2011 to 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 150 words
The chart illustrates the preferred destinations for a trip, among Venezuelan students, between 2011 and 2014. The city considered are three: London, Rome and
Paris
, with trends and data for every year.
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Firstly
, the most notable feature of the graph is the trend of students going to Linking Words
Paris
. In fact, in 2011 Use synonyms
Paris
was the least attractive of the three cities, with 10.000 tourists, but, from that moment, saw a sharp rise, arriving at 20.000 in 2013, Use synonyms
thus
becoming the most visited city. Linking Words
However
, between 2013 and 2014, there was a decrease to more or less 17.000 visitors.
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On the other hand
, London had a more stable tendency, with a slight increase every year, that become a little steeper after 2013, the same year of the decline of Linking Words
Paris
numbers. Use synonyms
As a result
, over the years, London passed from 15.000 visitors to almost 20.000, and from the second to the first place of the most visited cities.
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Finally
, Rome had the most volatile trend. In fact, in 2011 was the preferred city by Venezuelan students, with more or less 17.000 tourists, but after that period the number of tourists declined until 2012 when they increased again to almost the same number in 2011. Linking Words
Nonetheless
, there was another decrease from 2013 to 2014, to 15.000 visitors, Linking Words
hence
making Rome the only centre that saw a decrease in the period.
In conclusion, it could be stated that the different cities had different trends during Linking Words
this
frame of time. Linking Words
In addition
, it seems that there was some sort of competition between these destinations, with inverse relations in rises and falls among the three capitals.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words paris with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "more or less" was used 2 times.
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