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In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in

#countries #people #bout #history #house
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few
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 countries, there is an increasing trend with
people
 researching information related to the
history
 of the
place
 they stay in. It becomes popular and very interesting with the
people
 who live
in
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these days.
To begin
 with, there are so many reasons with regard to
the
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searching
of
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for
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 the
history
 of a
place
. One reason is that some
people
 are in
the
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belief
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of
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that, the
house
 they live in should bring good luck to the
people
 who lived there.
Therefore
, they start to find out about the yesteryears of the
house
. As an example, one of my friends who recently changed their residence informed me that finding out the
history
 of their previous
house
 they came to know that the previous owner of that property had been suicide inside that
house
.
Hence
, they felt it will bring them bad luck when living
that
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house
.
Therefore
, they sold that
house
 and moved to another
place
. Another reason is that if we can find out any historical value of the
place
 we live in we can sell it for a higher price.
For instance
, my father is like to collect ancient things. Because of ,that he is always trying to buy things with historical value without considering the cost. The best method to research a
place
 or a building is to search on the internet. These days we can find any information using websites. Not only that, but
also
 we can find the
history
 of a
place
 by asking our elders. To illustrate, my grandfather is 88 years old and if any of our neighbours wanted to find out anything
in
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 the past they came to meet my grandfather. In conclusion, finding out the
history
 of the
place
 we live in has positive and negative effects on the
people
 who live there, as educated
people
, we should be able to filter good things. if we can do it,
this
history
 search will be benefited every
people
.
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