With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed?

Nowadays, the advancement of healthy technology is massively improved.

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, society should be willing to take charge of senior years people. I believe with the massive improvement in

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care, the community

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will be able to tackle the upward

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of golden agers.

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essay will elaborate thoroughly on my standpoint followed by the method that could be implemented to cope with the increasing elderly population. To commence with, it is true that some medical advancements are successfully improved the elderly's life quality. It is apparent by the increasing

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of survivors of a particular

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. For the elderly with heart

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and cancer for an instance, in Jakarta, it is common that most of the

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in the cardiology and internal

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unit are dominated by the golden agers. If it is compared to more than 10 decades ago when sophisticated technology is not being invented yet,

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as the EKG tool or chemotherapy treatment, there are numerous elderly that are unable to receive proper treatment;

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the mortality in elderly with

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cardiovascular and internal

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was high. Turning to

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current era, some advanced treatments are emerging that deliberately expand the life expectancy of the elderly which brings to the increasing

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of golden agers.

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notion can be managed by the expansion of new public

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centres; because as long as the

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of hospitals is sufficient, society will always be able to take care of all

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, especially the elderly. In Jakarta, the presence of public

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centres is easy to spot,

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,

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the elderly population with chronic

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is high in Jakarta,

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easily reach the hospital and receive the right treatment quickly. In conclusion, the advancement of medical technology can inevitably enlarge the life expectancy in the elderly group which can cause an increasing

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in the advanced population.

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, I believe that as long as the

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facilities are sufficient, society can embrace and tackle elderly

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without the burden