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Essay topics: In many western countries there is an increasing number of couples choosing to have no children. What are the advantages and disadvantages to couples having no children?

An increasing trend among married
couples
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 is deciding to remain childless. The main benefits are that they can focus on their careers and have more free
time
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 for themselves. The main drawbacks of having no
children
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 are feeling uncomfortable among
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 groups and having no one to take
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 of them when they get older. One main advantage of remaining childless is that married
couples
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 can be focused on their work.
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 means they do not have fewer responsibilities and distractors in their life compared to
couples
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 who have
children
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. Another advantage is child-free
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 have more spare
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. Taking
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 of
children
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 needs a lot of
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, so
couples
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 without juveniles can enjoy themselves more after work.
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, many
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 stop going to gyms and meeting with their friends because they have to look after their
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. One of the disadvantages of
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 who decided not to have
children
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 is that they can struggle when they hang out with their friends as most of them have minors. Most parents want to spend their
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 with
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 who have a child as well.
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, to have anyone who can take after them in their old years is a disadvantage too.
Children
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 want to look after their parents because their parents did the same when they were a child.
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, a large proportion of the old people who live in nurseries and
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 homes have no
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. In conclusion, the main benefits of staying child-free can help
couples
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 to be more career-oriented and have more free
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 for themselves, the main drawbacks are not fitting into their friends' group and having anyone who can take
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 of them once they become older.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Financial freedom
  • Personal development
  • Financial burden
  • Population control
  • Global overpopulation
  • Emotional gap
  • Social pressures
  • Stigma
  • Fulfillment
  • Legacy
  • Continuation
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