some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together

As is known to all, some individuals believe that melody is a good way for people to know each other from different cultures and ages. Some of them would tend

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the other way. To my mind, I prefer the former view. There is no doubt that music is a kind of communication without words. Even

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are not in the same country, using a different language, the melody could be sharing their emotions together in one song.

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, a song written with happiness, it can be shown in the rhythm. When people heard a song made of the Lunar New Year, they could feel the joy of the other cultures' celebrations. It is the easiest step to know another tradition.

On the other hand

, nice songs are always bringing the elders and the younger with each other.

For instance

, a famous England boy band, Westlife. Their fans come from worldwide and no matter what ages are they, they enjoyed the show at the same time. It was a big party for all fans over the world.

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, music is a common topic for anyone.

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as parents would like to share their favourite singers and bands with their children. It increases more chances of chatting with family members and sitting together to

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their recommendations for songs. These could enhance the relationship in every year old and nation.

To conclude

, I agree that music is a nice way to bring people together from different cultures and ages.

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, I would like to introduce local songs to foreigners too.