These days people prefer to watch live performances (shows, concerts) through tv or computer, online rather than go to the place of that event. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Today many people prefer watching live shows and concerts at home on
tv
or computer Correct your spelling
TV
instead
of doing it in reality. I agree that mostly
people watch content at home and Correct your spelling
most
i'm
going to explain that in my essay.
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I'm
First
reason is that Add an article
The first
it
comfortable Add a verb
isit
wasit
to
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for
individual
because a lot of people can't go to concerts in real life Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
due to
that many of that
events going Correct determiner usage
those
in
other cities or countries. Change preposition
on in
Also
sometimes even if that event happens in local area tickets usually
expensive and Add a missing verb
are usually
number
of them Change the article
a number
the number
are
really small so the only way to watch Correct subject-verb agreement
is
show
is only by Add an article
the show
a show
tv
or computer. In my city for example
when popular artists like Kairat Nurtas,Dimash
are making a concert tickets usually Correct word choice
and Dimash
sells
quickly and you need to watch at home.
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sell
Second
reason is cost many individuals can't afford Add an article
The second
such
expenses and because of that
they need to watch it on Add a comma
,that
tv
. Prices are big usually and especially for Correct your spelling
TV
Correct article usage
a stars
stars
show Fix the agreement mistake
star
however
prices can even double or triple if concert
Add an article
the concert
will be
soon. Wrong verb form
is
This
is ofcourse
understandable Correct your spelling
of course
due to
rent
of Correct article usage
the rent
place
for Correct article usage
the place
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the event
event
or other needs of Fix the agreement mistake
events
show
. I Add an article
the show
belive
that many individuals get through Correct your spelling
believe
this
experience in their on
life so they know what Correct your spelling
own
i'm
talking about.
In Change the capitalization
I'm
conclusion
I can say that because of reasons that I already noticed in paragraphs above like cost and comfort watching shows on Add a comma
,conclusion
tv
or computer is Correct your spelling
TV
common
thing in our world today and I Add an article
a common
the common
belive
that Correct your spelling
believe
this
trend will continue in future decades.Submitted by Abdu.abetayev on
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