The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecast. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecast. 

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The diagram illustrates the process of the accumulation of
weather
data in real-time and forecasting to the public by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology. There are four steps in
this
artificial process, starting with data collection, analyzing, preparation and
finally
, publishing the precise
weather
forecast.
Initially
, live
weather
conditions are accumulated by three main sources of information, the satellite in the galaxy (outside the earth), the radar on the ground and the drifting buoy on the ocean, which are relying on each other. The satellite manufacture satellite photo,
while
the radar produces a radar screen and the drifting buoy generates a synoptic chart for analyzing and forecasting detailed
weather
conditions. Afterwards, the analyzed data are prepared on the computer before publishing for citizens across the country.
Then
the precise
weather
forecasts are
finally
broadcasted to the public via TV, radio, and phone in the form of news reading and a recorded announcement.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words weather with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.

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