The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecast. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The diagram illustrates the process of the accumulation of

weather

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data in real-time and forecasting to the public by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology. There are four steps in

this

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artificial process, starting with data collection, analyzing, preparation and

finally

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, publishing the precise

weather

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forecast.

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, live

weather

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conditions are accumulated by three main sources of information, the satellite in the galaxy (outside the earth), the radar on the ground and the drifting buoy on the ocean, which are relying on each other. The satellite manufacture satellite photo,

while

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the radar produces a radar screen and the drifting buoy generates a synoptic chart for analyzing and forecasting detailed

weather

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conditions. Afterwards, the analyzed data are prepared on the computer before publishing for citizens across the country.

Then

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the precise

weather

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forecasts are

finally

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broadcasted to the public via TV, radio, and phone in the form of news reading and a recorded announcement.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words weather with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.

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5
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

152 words

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The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecast. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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