Your sister has asked you to organize the music for her wedding at the end of next month. Write a letter to your friend who is an amateur musician. In your letter ● ask your friend to perform at the wedding ● describe why he/she would be suitable for this event ● explain how your friend will be compensated if they agree.
Dear Inder,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. It has been a long time since we Linking Words
last
talked. Just a quick life update my sister is getting married next month and she has given me responsibility for organizing music for the wedding. Well, now I am gonna ask you for a very big favour as you are well aware of how crazy a fan my sister is of classical Indian dance. Could you give one performance on her Sangeet night? Please ! Please ! Linking Words
This
will be a complete surprise for her as I know she is not expecting Linking Words
this
at all.
Moving on to the reasons for choosing you is only one that you are the best. I clearly remember my sister telling me once that she admires you a lot for following your passion for dance and making a successful career out of it.
If you agree to the performance, which I really hope that you do, I would like to take care of all your expenses from tickets to living arrangements. And we are not fighting on Linking Words
this
one for sure.
Waiting for your reply. See you soon hopefully.
Best regards,
Simran.Linking Words
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