Nowadays, more people are choosing to socialise online rather than face to face? Is this a positive or negative development?
Today, our society has a wide list of opportunities to talk online with others
while
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people
argue that a Use synonyms
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face to
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face-to-face
face
conversation could not be Use synonyms
substitued
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substituted
by
a phone call or a video chat. I think that different types of internet communication Change preposition
for
is
very beneficial, but it is crucial not to forget about socialising in real life.
On the one hand, as I mentioned before, all these opportunities to have a conversation with Change the verb form
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people
all around the world bring us a lot of positive things. Use synonyms
For instance
, nowadays we can share important information, knowledge, Linking Words
news
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and news
for
a few seconds. Change preposition
in
This
leads to improvements in scientific international work and more sustainable economic development.
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On the other hand
, Linking Words
such
innovations in online communication could be very harmful Linking Words
for
our ability to talk Change the preposition
to
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face to
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face-to-face
face
. I maintain that even video chats could not create the same atmosphere which we have Use synonyms
while
talking in real life. As an example, personally, I’ve always loved to have a conversation with my friends, Linking Words
however
, very often I am bored of speaking with them online. I do not really know the reason, Linking Words
however
, I do see the difference.
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To conclude
, I consider that online communication brings us a lot of positive things. Linking Words
However
, when Linking Words
people
start socialising online rather Use synonyms
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face
to Change preposition
than face
face
, I am sure that it could be very harmful Use synonyms
for
their Change the preposition
to
relationship
with other Fix the agreement mistake
relationships
people
. So, I think that Use synonyms
all
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apply
this
situation is a positive development, but as every Linking Words
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with its own exceptions.Correct your spelling
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