Nowadays, more people are choosing to socialise online rather than face to face? Is this a positive or negative development?

Today, our society has a wide list of opportunities to talk online with others
while
sitting at home.
However
, some
people
argue that a
face to
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face
conversation could not be
substitued
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substituted
by
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a phone call or a video chat. I think that different types of internet communication
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very beneficial, but it is crucial not to forget about socialising in real life. On the one hand, as I mentioned before, all these opportunities to have a conversation with
people
all around the world bring us a lot of positive things.
For instance
, nowadays we can share important information, knowledge,
news
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from one country to another
for
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a few seconds.
This
leads to improvements in scientific international work and more sustainable economic development.
On the other hand
,
such
innovations in online communication could be very harmful
for
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our ability to talk
face to
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face
. I maintain that even video chats could not create the same atmosphere which we have
while
talking in real life. As an example, personally, I’ve always loved to have a conversation with my friends,
however
, very often I am bored of speaking with them online. I do not really know the reason,
however
, I do see the difference.
To conclude
, I consider that online communication brings us a lot of positive things.
However
, when
people
start socialising online rather
face
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to
face
, I am sure that it could be very harmful
for
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to
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their
relationship
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relationships
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with other
people
. So, I think that
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this
situation is a positive development, but as every
rul
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rule
with its own exceptions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social media platforms
  • online interactions
  • virtual communication
  • global community
  • interpersonal skills
  • digital divide
  • cyberspace
  • virtual presence
  • social networking
  • mental wellbeing
  • digital literacy
  • safe spaces
  • marginalized groups
  • face-to-face communication
  • socialisation
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