Particular cultures are under threat nowdays due to the fact that we are living in a global village.What do you think can be done to protect a society's traditional values and cultures?

We lived in an era, where everything was under the control of advanced technology and
people
's cultures were
also
part of it.I think we can protect our
culture
via the
internet
and
the
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government
support is
also
necessary.
Firstly
, the
internet
is the best place to promote our
culture
.Because every single individual uses the
internet
and we can put our valuable traditional information on social media.Where tonnes of
people
have
chance
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to know their country and
culture
.
Apart from
this
, tv channels should make content about national
culture
.
For instance
, Bangladesh's national television produces a lot of drama ,movies , and songs about our liberation war,
the
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history of British dictatorship.Which assists our younger generation to gain knowledge about our
culture
.They can
knew
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how British and
pakistan
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brutaly
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brutally
mardered
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murdered
our innocent
people
and looted our natural resources.
Secondly
,
government
and the general
people
can play a vital role in
this
subject. To be precise, the
government
can organize
the
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cultural events, where
people
can participate free of cost and enhance their knowledge.
Moreover
, creating awareness would be a key feature because without awareness nothing will change anything.
For example
, communities should make posters, cards, and leaflets about our
culture
and provide them to
people
.
Also
, they can organize events on our traditional day to give ideas related to
culture
. Every year school
authorities
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should yearly show where students can perform . In conclusion, every nation has its own
culture
and its responsibility is to secure them.Though
,
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the
internet
has some detrimental effects on our
culture
,
however
,it is the best way of promotion.
Furthermore
,
government
and
people
can
also
save
this
via
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creating awareness.
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